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Your best travel writing of 2017 – here's the entry that won a reader £1,000

Your travel writing has covered much of the globe this year, from Guatemala to Morocco - This content is subject to copyright.
Your travel writing has covered much of the globe this year, from Guatemala to Morocco - This content is subject to copyright.

Each week our Just Back competition shines a light on your travel writing. Here we reveal our favourite entry for 2017. Emma Fry wins the annual prize of £1,000 for her tale of a motorcycle purchase in Guatemala City. Read her story below, or follow the links at the bottom of the page for other shortlisted entries.

The motorcycle man says, “I like your legs”. “Muy bien,” I stammer, pausing to look down at my legs. “But how much do you want for the motorcycle?”

Interrupted by the roar of a “chicken bus” engine, Andres, aka the motorcycle man, continues to pass judgment about my legs as I attempt to haggle down the price of an ancient Kawasaki KLR 650 motorcycle with no paperwork and dangerously bald tyres.

The words Guate, Guate, Guate drift past as young men holler to locals from the open doors of bright yellow buses once used to take children to school somewhere in America now bound for the capital, Guatemala City.

“Andres, I think it’s leaking oil?”

"I haggle over the motorcycle, which has no paperwork and dangerously bald tyres" - Credit: ALAMY
"I haggle over the motorcycle, which has no paperwork and dangerously bald tyres" Credit: ALAMY

His wife, Itzel, who’s wearing typical Mayan clothes the colours of tropical flowers, the busy patterns an emblem of the 1,000-year legacy of her ancestors, nods her head.

All three of us are distracted momentarily by the familiar sound of gentle clapping as Doña Marie next door manipulates a mound of cornflour dough known as masa into perfectly small tortillas ready for lunch.

Strong legs, you’ll need them for that motorcycle

Back to the patch of oil under the motorcycle, Andres gazes out of his shop over to the dusty bus station, the same view he’s had for the past 27 years and says: “Si, pero son gotas de calidad”! (Yes, but it’s leaking quality drops!)

Guatemala’s turbulent history isn’t portrayed in the friendly faces of the locals. Itzel looks and me and gestures questioningly: “Arroz con frijol?” (rice with beans) as I’m invited for lunch.

White rice, black beans and tortillas, fried chicken for them not for me. The three of us, Andres, Itzel and I, perch on beer crates and eat in comfortable silence broken only once by a young boy of around six selling cinnamon-flavoured chewing gum.

The sun goes down over Guatemala City - Credit: ALAMY
The sun goes down over Guatemala City Credit: ALAMY

Andres looks at my legs again, I’m wearing jeans.

“Strong legs, you’ll need them for that motorcycle, it’s five times your size.”

“Seis mil, el ultimo precio.” (Six thousand quetzales, the final price.)

My mind racing, I’m trying to convert quickly in my head but am distracted by the sensory overload that is Guatemala.

“$800. OK, done.” We shake on it.

Andres grins. Itzel reaches out, puts her hand on my arm and squeezes in reassurance. In her mother tongue, Kaqchikel – one of the 20 or so indigenous languages of the country – she let’s me know that god is watching over me.

Clutching a new set of keys and the one item of paperwork the motorcycle comes with, it was like having a newborn kitten that needs protecting. It’s an interesting exchange, too, I think to myself, considering I only left the house to buy a sandwich.

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lessons in travel 2017
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How to enter the next Just Back competition

Email your entry, in 500 words (with the text in the body of the email), to justback@telegraph.co.uk. For terms and conditions, see telegraph.co.uk/tt-justback.

The weekly winner will receive £200 in the currency of their choice from the Post Office and be entered into the annual competition at the end of the year. 

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